Wednesday, February 8, 2012

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I will talk about my friend Shearley Ovallez, She is from Maracaibo-Venezuela, She is 17 years old, and she speaks a little English. She is studying Industrial engineering at Urbe. She likes movies, going out with her friends and chocolate.
She is a very nice person.

1 comment:

  1. Michelle.. this is what you wrote....:

    "I will talk about my friend Shearley Ovallez, She is from Maracaibo-Venezuela, She is 17 years old, and speak little english, she is studying Industrial engineering at Urbe. She likes movies, go out with her friends and chocolate.
    She is a very nice person."

    Now, this is the correct way to say that...
    I will talk about my friend Shearley Ovallez. She is from Maracaibo-Venezuela. She is 17 years old, and she speaks a little English. She is studying Industrial Engineering at Urbe. She likes movies, going out with her friends and chocolate.

    there.. mmm check orthography and the use of the third person... It's a great post...

    Keep on shining Love and Peace!
    Doris3m
    She is a very nice person.

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